I’ll read your entire manuscript. I’ll look at point of view, character development, plot, scene structure, tension, pacing, imagery, and narrative arc. And because good scenes are made from great sentences, I’ll zoom in and analyze each line, focusing on word choice, rhythm, syntax, paragraph structure, dialogue, grammar, and punctuation.

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In the margins of your manuscript, I’ll provide a detailed commentary with suggestions for revision. I’ll also include a letter providing an overview of larger developmental concerns. The margin notes, together with the letter, form a micro-macro guide to help you revise your work. I’ll also provide up to three hours of consultation in person, via Zoom, or by phone. If you would like, I will provide a digital recording of our consultation. 

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Fee: 3.5¢/word