I’ll read your entire manuscript. I’ll look at point of view, character development, plot, scene structure, tension, pacing, imagery, and narrative arc. HERE’S WHERE THE BONUS COMES IN: I have a tough time developmental editing without line editing. I’ll zoom in and analyze elements such as word choice, rhythm, syntax, paragraph structure, dialogue, grammar, and punctuation.

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In the margins of your manuscript, I’ll provide a detailed commentary with suggestions for revision. I’ll also include a letter providing an overview of larger developmental concerns. The margin notes, together with the letter, form a micro-macro guide to help you revise your work. I’ll also provide up to three hours of consultation in person, via Zoom, or by phone. If you would like, I will provide a digital recording of our consultation. 

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Fee: $55/hour